71,200 words (no holes or parts left that need fleshing out)
Last night, with Melissa’s help, I was able to fill in the last missing section.
This was the last of the second drafts. The last of the hidden drafts. It’s time to start showing it to people.
I was going to post it publicly online for peer review but when I suggested it on
I still want to put it in front of readers before I put it in front of writers, but I’ll hide it behind the only message board I’m a part of.
Of course, if anyone reading this wants a copy of the word file, just let me know.